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I am a Front-End Developer with several years of experience as well as I have my B.S. in Computer Science. I am doing research and pursuing my MS in Computer Science. However, I am somewhat struggling to word my career objective correctly and in a fashion in which I could be considered for admittance into Grad School. How could this snippet be modified to accomplish the goal while remaining under 150 characters:

I have always been fascinated with disassembling and reassembling objects to figure out how they work. When I was ten, my mother brought home several desktop computers. I figured out how to remove all of the components and combine or reinstall them, all while keeping the computers in an operable state. This was the beginning of a constantly growing interest with computers and how they operate. My interests range from hardware to operating systems, and current employment in software engineering.

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closed as off-topic by Gilles Feb 1 '16 at 22:55

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    $\begingroup$ This seems more appropriate for academia.se. $\endgroup$ – Yuval Filmus Feb 1 '16 at 20:15
  • $\begingroup$ I'm closing this question as off-topic because it's about writing motivation letters. It has been reposted on Academia. $\endgroup$ – Gilles Feb 1 '16 at 22:55

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